EPN (Revising Paragraph)

Don’t forget that writing is a process. A every important part of that process is revising. The word revision is combination of the root word vision and the prefix re which mean “Again”.When you revise, you “see again” to see how you can improve it. What kind king of change shoot you make you revise :

            -Add new idea or more spesific support
            -Ilimate irrelevant sentences
            -re arangge idea to improve the organization
            -Edit to correct the grammer punctuation and spelling.